Kiša

Odskače noćas
udara kao toljagom o glavu
krupna jesenja kiša

Oslonjen na laktove
zurim kroz prozor

dvije usamljene žene
plaču uz ogradu

na nebu dvije ptice kruže.

Ne mogu da usnim.

Veljko Bosnić


Published: 28.09.2008.
Classified as: Poezija
Comments: 1
Author:

Discussion: Total 1 Response

Comments: 1 to “Kiša”

  1. Marko Glisic says:

    Dobro je. Onako Vojislavski: “Mutno je nebo svo!” A opet moderno je i originalno. Svidja mi se i paralelizam zene – ptice ostvaren u broju 2.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published Required fields are marked *

*

You may use these HTML tags and attributes: <a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <cite> <code> <del datetime=""> <em> <i> <q cite=""> <s> <strike> <strong>

  • Follow Tragovi

    • Facebook
    • RSS

    Do you write poetry?

    Send your poetry to tragovi.blog[at]gmail.com
    Successful entries will be published.